Self Introduction
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
My name is Changhoon kang and my English name is Ricky. I was born on February 24th, 1980. So I’m 35 years old. I live in Suwon with my wife. And I have no child.
I work as a SW engineer at Samsung SDS. I have developed many SW programs about network server for 9 years.
My hobby is a dancing. Especially I dance to the swing . The swing is a dancing to the rhythm of the Jazz music with a partner. I have danced the swing for 5 years.
I performed swing dance 5 times in front of many peoples. I think that dancing a swing changes my life to be more energetic.
I work as a SW engineer at Samsung SDS. I have developed many SW programs about network server for 9 years.
My hobby is a dancing. Especially I dance to the swing . The swing is a dancing to the rhythm of the Jazz music with a partner. I have danced the swing for 5 years.
I performed swing dance 5 times in front of many peoples. I think that dancing a swing changes my life to be more energetic.
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