SNS
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I don’t enjoy using SNS like Facebook and Twitter. Because I don’t like that someone that I don’t know can get my privacy easily. Also I think using SNS looks like killing time. Some of my friends waste their time with giggling while seeing stupid contents through SNS. Sometimes they look childish. I use just one SNS, Kakao talk, because it is the most famous messenger through Smartphone. All of my friends use it instead of text message when they want to send text. Its fare is free. I can upload my photo on it. It is a good way to show my emotion and feeling to other people. Furthermore, I can make a chat room to talk with friends. I send just one message to friends when I want to give some news to them by making a chat room. That’s why it is more comfortable than text message. I love to take photos of my food. When I eat good food, I like to share it with my friends so that they can see what kind of good food I am eating. I think there are advantage and disadvantage to use SNS.
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