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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 07. 22 조회 13098

my neighbors

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I live in an apartment complex.
The neighbors who i know are a few.
I usually come across my neighbors who live next door and same building in the elevator. We only exchange nods when we meet.
I'm not really close to my neighbors.
But i know the neighbors who live next door.
The husband and the wife are an office worker and They are young.
They work for 삼성 like me but we sometimes meet in the front of the door.
Because we have the different working time.
My neighbors are not sociable, so they say only hello to me when we come across. Ah, anyway the neighbors who talk with me live in the upstairs.
The husband is a taxi driver and the wife is a housewife.
Not long ago, we talked about a private taxi driver license.
He is older than me, but he is very kind.
It will be a good opportunity to get to know that better.
튜터 교정 답변

I live in an apartment complex.- good

The neighbors who i know are a few.

I usually come across my to my neighbors who live next door and same building in the elevator.

We only exchange nods when we meet.- good

I'm not really close to my neighbors.- good

But i know the neighbors who live next door. Good

The husband and the wife are an office workersand They are young.

They work for 삼성 like me but we sometimes meet in the front of the door.

Because we have the different working time.

My neighbors are not sociable, so they say only hello to me when we come across.- Good

Ah, anyway the neighbors who talk with me live in the upstairs.

The husband is a taxi driver and the wife is a housewife- Good

Not long ago, we talked about a private taxi driver license. - Good

He is older than me, but he is very kind.- Good

It will be a good opportunity to get to know that them better.

 

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