My weekend
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I usually stay at home on weekends even though I like hanging out.
Because my daughter is third-year of high school.
It is difficult to entered in University in korea and She have to study hard.
So i have to stay beside her on weekends.
Because i am sorry to her, if i hang out alone for me.
But I regularly go to big supermarket with my wife on weekends.
This time is very good for me.
I can enjoy shopping and have a nice meal.
And sometimes, I go to temple near my home.
I believe in Buddha. I like going to temple and praying for happiness of my family.
After i go and get back there, i always feel great.
Because my daughter is third-year of high school.
It is difficult to entered in University in korea and She have to study hard.
So i have to stay beside her on weekends.
Because i am sorry to her, if i hang out alone for me.
But I regularly go to big supermarket with my wife on weekends.
This time is very good for me.
I can enjoy shopping and have a nice meal.
And sometimes, I go to temple near my home.
I believe in Buddha. I like going to temple and praying for happiness of my family.
After i go and get back there, i always feel great.
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