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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I like going camping.
The camping place is the perfect place for my children.
My son and I usually play baseball while my daughter likes to ride a bike. My wife reads book at the bench.
One of my favorite camping place in Seoul is the Han River park.
It is surrounded by beautiful nature and there are various activities that families can do together
I have purchased tents and copel and other equipments necessary for the camping last year.
I could only go camping once due to my work.
I feel guilty for my children, so I have decided to go camping at least twice this year.
I like to go to the park on weekends.
I go there almost every Saturday with my family and always prepare
some food such as homemade sandwiches, salads and kookies
Because, it take only five minutes to get there from my house.
The camping place is the perfect place for my children.
My son and I usually play baseball while my daughter likes to ride a bike. My wife reads book at the bench.
One of my favorite camping place in Seoul is the Han River park.
It is surrounded by beautiful nature and there are various activities that families can do together
I have purchased tents and copel and other equipments necessary for the camping last year.
I could only go camping once due to my work.
I feel guilty for my children, so I have decided to go camping at least twice this year.
I like to go to the park on weekends.
I go there almost every Saturday with my family and always prepare
some food such as homemade sandwiches, salads and kookies
Because, it take only five minutes to get there from my house.
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