Home work...

I like to go to the beach. Also, I can be good check out some hot chick on the beach. 

-> I like to go to the beach because I can check out some hot girls on the beach. 

I had my most memorable experience at my daughter kindergarten graduate concert. My daughter and her's friends are prepared very hard music and dance. I was included everyone to them clap one's hands and sing along. Finally, We all stood up to pay tribute the excellent performance. Because, we all to know their worked hard.

-> I had my most memorable experience at my daughter's kindergarten graduation concert. My daughter and her friends prepared very hard for a music and dance presentation. I clapped my hands and sing along. Finally, We all stood up to pay tribute to the excellent performance. Because, we all know that they worked hard.