traveling experience internationally!
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Today, I want to tell you about traveling experience internationally.
I have experiences that I went to an other contries like India, Cambodia, Japan, Taiwan.
I went to India and Cambodia for volunteer work and I traveled Japan and Taiwan alon.
It was very good memory for me. one of the best contry where I have been is in the India.
I don't forget smile of children. They lived not good enviroment.
But They look like happinest in the world because always with smile.
I didn't satisfy my life at that time, although I have a lot of things.
They did't get many things, they can enjoy their life and afford whatever.
I was shamed. when I came back to Korea, the experience became positive energy.
So, after 2 years, I would go to Cambodia for vorunteer work.
I have experiences that I went to an other contries like India, Cambodia, Japan, Taiwan.
I went to India and Cambodia for volunteer work and I traveled Japan and Taiwan alon.
It was very good memory for me. one of the best contry where I have been is in the India.
I don't forget smile of children. They lived not good enviroment.
But They look like happinest in the world because always with smile.
I didn't satisfy my life at that time, although I have a lot of things.
They did't get many things, they can enjoy their life and afford whatever.
I was shamed. when I came back to Korea, the experience became positive energy.
So, after 2 years, I would go to Cambodia for vorunteer work.
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