let's go jogging with my friend
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hello Bree? This is Jason.
I'm calling to ask you to jog with me this Saturday morning.
Do you have any plan for that time? I hope you don’t.
As we talked before, we definitely need an exercise.
Do you have any suitable clothes and shoes for jogging?
As you know, we don't need a fancy clothes and shoes.
I usually go to jog at my university ground,
but if you know another place in mind, please tell me about it.
And do you have any other people whom you want to join?
I'm happy to exercise together.
And the most important question, what about having a breakfast together after jogging?
I know a very nice breakfast café where you will love. Why don't we go together?
As soon as you check my message, call me back.
Bye.
I'm calling to ask you to jog with me this Saturday morning.
Do you have any plan for that time? I hope you don’t.
As we talked before, we definitely need an exercise.
Do you have any suitable clothes and shoes for jogging?
As you know, we don't need a fancy clothes and shoes.
I usually go to jog at my university ground,
but if you know another place in mind, please tell me about it.
And do you have any other people whom you want to join?
I'm happy to exercise together.
And the most important question, what about having a breakfast together after jogging?
I know a very nice breakfast café where you will love. Why don't we go together?
As soon as you check my message, call me back.
Bye.
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