Traveling Internationaly
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I want to tell you about traveling experienced internationaly following yester day.
3months ago, I went to Taiwan. I couldn't help going there alone, because my close friends was working during week. The reason why I made plan to go Taiwan, I don't have enough time and Taiwan is close from Korea. There are a lot of good place like palace, 101 building, national museum and so on.
one of the best things is Taiwanese who is really kind. When I ask how can I get destination, They explained it kindly and even brought me to there.
one time, I asked someone But, He was not a Taiwanese. He was a Thailander!!
We began chatting and found we had in common. We spent an enjoyable time during taking the bus.
I felt as if we had known each other for a while. I did get his SNS account.
Now we keep in touch regularly. I'm planning to go to Thailand this winter to meet him.
3months ago, I went to Taiwan. I couldn't help going there alone, because my close friends was working during week. The reason why I made plan to go Taiwan, I don't have enough time and Taiwan is close from Korea. There are a lot of good place like palace, 101 building, national museum and so on.
one of the best things is Taiwanese who is really kind. When I ask how can I get destination, They explained it kindly and even brought me to there.
one time, I asked someone But, He was not a Taiwanese. He was a Thailander!!
We began chatting and found we had in common. We spent an enjoyable time during taking the bus.
I felt as if we had known each other for a while. I did get his SNS account.
Now we keep in touch regularly. I'm planning to go to Thailand this winter to meet him.
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