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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
When i was a kid my father gave me a cut dog.
At that time, she was an two month old 진돗개 and we after much consideration and settled on the name 오바마
오바마 and i have been best friends ever since
we went to park together on weekends.
although, now is without her, once she means the world to my whole family.
my favorite museum is the Leeum art museum.
It is huge and about one thousand people can enjoy the art at the same time.
the whole building is very clean and modern-looking go it like it.
actually, i have never been able to paint.
so, i was envious to be a good painter.
But, i like the art museum because could many things.
At that time, she was an two month old 진돗개 and we after much consideration and settled on the name 오바마
오바마 and i have been best friends ever since
we went to park together on weekends.
although, now is without her, once she means the world to my whole family.
my favorite museum is the Leeum art museum.
It is huge and about one thousand people can enjoy the art at the same time.
the whole building is very clean and modern-looking go it like it.
actually, i have never been able to paint.
so, i was envious to be a good painter.
But, i like the art museum because could many things.
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