self introdution
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
my name is JI KYOUNG, english name is SARAH
i'm twenti-night years old
i work for a samsung sds
my department is safety-enviroment part
i was born is CHANGWON
now i live in SEOUL,
i have lived there ten month
there are four member in my family
father, mother, brother and me
my mother used to piano teather in academy
but now housewife
i'm intersting in finding new resturance and bar
one of my favorite things to do on weekends
is visiting trendy resturance and bar
and i allso loke to travel a lot
i try to travel abroad once a year.
i'm twenti-night years old
i work for a samsung sds
my department is safety-enviroment part
i was born is CHANGWON
now i live in SEOUL,
i have lived there ten month
there are four member in my family
father, mother, brother and me
my mother used to piano teather in academy
but now housewife
i'm intersting in finding new resturance and bar
one of my favorite things to do on weekends
is visiting trendy resturance and bar
and i allso loke to travel a lot
i try to travel abroad once a year.
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