Jogging
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
As far as I remember, It may a couple of years ago.
I started have a jogging. Because my doctor recommended it to reduce the depression symtomps.
It was very helpful to relieve my stress and refresh my mind.
I used to have a jogging twice a week.
When I first joged, 30min of jogging was very difficult,
but after serveral times of trying I adopt about it and continued to it for about 1hour.
But Thesedays I don't do that. Becuase I feel exhausted after jogging or knee-pain.
So I changed my mind to ride a bicycle.
It is very helpful to reduce my back-pain.
and I'd like to ride a bicycle at the bike-track in the park which is located in near my house.
It's my story about jogging and why I changed my mind.
That's all~
I started have a jogging. Because my doctor recommended it to reduce the depression symtomps.
It was very helpful to relieve my stress and refresh my mind.
I used to have a jogging twice a week.
When I first joged, 30min of jogging was very difficult,
but after serveral times of trying I adopt about it and continued to it for about 1hour.
But Thesedays I don't do that. Becuase I feel exhausted after jogging or knee-pain.
So I changed my mind to ride a bicycle.
It is very helpful to reduce my back-pain.
and I'd like to ride a bicycle at the bike-track in the park which is located in near my house.
It's my story about jogging and why I changed my mind.
That's all~
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