Memorable experiences at the park
One day, I went to park alone because I wanted to relax and think alone.
It was cloudy but not raining, so I didn’t bring an umbrella.
However, the sky was getting dark and it started to rain.
There was no place to wait until the rain passed.
I was wet from head to toe.
Shortly after, one man came to me and gave me an umbrella. He had two.
He looked angel to me at that time.
After two days, I met him again in the office. He was my new boss.
We were laughing and I thanked him again.
Now, we sometimes talk about that happening
and I always bring an umbrella whenever weather is cloudy.
I often go to park to take a walk. One day, I went to park alone because I wanted to relax and think alone. It was cloudy but not raining, so I didn’t bring an umbrella. However, the sky was getting dark and it started to rain. There was no place to wait until the rain passed. I was wet from head to toe. Shortly after, one man came to me and gave me an umbrella. He had two. He looked angel to me at that time. After two days, I met him again in the office. He was my new boss. We were laughing and I thanked him again. Now, we sometimes talk about that happening and I always bring an umbrella whenever weather is cloudy.
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-> I often go to the park to take a walk.
-> One day, I went to the park alone because I wanted to relax and think alone.
-> He looked like an angel to me at that time.
-> I always bring an umbrella whenever the weather is cloudy.
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Hi Jason,
You did a good job in this one.
Most of the lapses that you had were only on the use of articles, so check the corrected sentences and study more about the use of articles (a/an) and (the). I hope I helped. See you next class Jason! Happy weekend! 