My favorite actress
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I like Angelina Jolie the most.
She is from America and very famous actress in the world.
The main reason I like her is that she is really kind and love kids,
and appearance is also gorgeous.
Secondly, she travels poor countries and help the poor as a volunteer.
She also donates lots of money to help people in Third World countries.
Finally, Tomb Raider is my favorite movie among her great movies.
I was really impressed with her acting. It was full of action.
After watching that movie, I became a big fan of her.
Someday, I want to see her in real life.
She is from America and very famous actress in the world.
The main reason I like her is that she is really kind and love kids,
and appearance is also gorgeous.
Secondly, she travels poor countries and help the poor as a volunteer.
She also donates lots of money to help people in Third World countries.
Finally, Tomb Raider is my favorite movie among her great movies.
I was really impressed with her acting. It was full of action.
After watching that movie, I became a big fan of her.
Someday, I want to see her in real life.
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