about my lunchtime
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When I have my lunchtime I usually go to the cafeteria of the compony with co-workers.
That cafeteria serves variety of meals - around 10 different kinds of choice they have- with unbeleavablely cheap price.
My office located right close to Gang-Nam Station , so It's very hard to find those great meal with cheap price.
So all of my co-workers and I realy enjoying eating at there.
Even thoug we have to walk 10 min. to get the cafeteria , there's no dougt to not having lunch at there.
The only thing I feel bad is my lunchtime is not too long. It's only an hour.
But still me and my co-workers have a great time. I think lunchtime is important to get to know about each others by talking their worlds and share our time.
That cafeteria serves variety of meals - around 10 different kinds of choice they have- with unbeleavablely cheap price.
My office located right close to Gang-Nam Station , so It's very hard to find those great meal with cheap price.
So all of my co-workers and I realy enjoying eating at there.
Even thoug we have to walk 10 min. to get the cafeteria , there's no dougt to not having lunch at there.
The only thing I feel bad is my lunchtime is not too long. It's only an hour.
But still me and my co-workers have a great time. I think lunchtime is important to get to know about each others by talking their worlds and share our time.
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