Watching Sports!
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Audrey, are you check Korean MLB player Hyun-Jin Ryu ? Also, there is another player in MLB.
He's name is Shin-Soo Choo.
And, This is my script. I wrote them but can't read in our class. I try to speak my story. but it is a little hard.
When I was high school, I watched my first baseball game. My high school has a baseball team.
So, some of my classmates are baseball player. In KOREA, there is the best famous high school baseball cup, the name of President cup.
In the high school baseball season, Our team won the game continuously and went to the final match. When the final match, all of the students went to the baseball park to cheer for our team.
My friends and I was very excited and the match was very fun.
My classmate hit the homerun and our team won the game and got a Cup. Also, He got a mvp.
I felt that the cheering is fun. After my first time to watch baseball game, I go to the baseball park for my favorite baseball team.
He's name is Shin-Soo Choo.
And, This is my script. I wrote them but can't read in our class. I try to speak my story. but it is a little hard.
When I was high school, I watched my first baseball game. My high school has a baseball team.
So, some of my classmates are baseball player. In KOREA, there is the best famous high school baseball cup, the name of President cup.
In the high school baseball season, Our team won the game continuously and went to the final match. When the final match, all of the students went to the baseball park to cheer for our team.
My friends and I was very excited and the match was very fun.
My classmate hit the homerun and our team won the game and got a Cup. Also, He got a mvp.
I felt that the cheering is fun. After my first time to watch baseball game, I go to the baseball park for my favorite baseball team.
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