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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 02. 05 조회 13751

Self introduction.

작성자: 1101765994 담당 튜터: Leah2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I was born in 1985, so i am 30 years old.
I work as a computer programmer at samsung sds company
I was a telecommunication technology major in univercity.
In my free time, i like to read books, especially comic book.

My job is to develop android application and I have to be a patient person to work well at my job.
When there is a problem in program, i have to find bugs and solve.


When i was a univercity students, we didn't have table tennis club unfortunately.
I just played with my friends frequently.
Even if i didn't have table tennis teacher, i am good at table tennis.
I attended the table tennis championship in univercity. i got second prize.

I am a very positive and faithful person. i said about my hobby. do you remeber?
in comic books, there are many person have good spirits. I try to be like a hero.
When we face difficult problems, i don't forget hope. i always believe that we can do it.
That is my character.
튜터 교정 답변

I was born in 1985; I am already 30 years of age. I am working as a computer programmer at Samsung SDS Company. I was a telecommunication technology majored. In my free time, I like to read books, especially comic books. My job is to develop android application and I have to be a patient person to work well at my job. When there is a problem in program, I have to find bugs and solve it. When I was a university student, we didn't have table tennis club. I just played with my friends frequently. Even if I didn't have table tennis teacher, I am good at table tennis. I attended the table tennis championship in university. I got the second prize. I am a very positive and faithful person. I said about my hobby. Do you remember? In comic books, there are many good characters. I try to be like a hero. When we face difficult problems, I don't lose hope. I always believe that we can do it. That is my character.


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