My lunchtime
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
We usually have one hour lunch time.
It usually begins at 11:30 and at 1:00.
Because we have so many people,
we have lunch time diffrently depending on stairs which we work at.
I have lunch with my co-workers in my department.
After that, We usually take a walk neraby compnay to talking about company or personel things.
I'm the happiest time in the day.
Because We havn't nearly time to talk each other in the workplace.
Sometimes I go to bank to deal with mony or go to the service center to fix something
or browsing internet to buy somthing.
It usually begins at 11:30 and at 1:00.
Because we have so many people,
we have lunch time diffrently depending on stairs which we work at.
I have lunch with my co-workers in my department.
After that, We usually take a walk neraby compnay to talking about company or personel things.
I'm the happiest time in the day.
Because We havn't nearly time to talk each other in the workplace.
Sometimes I go to bank to deal with mony or go to the service center to fix something
or browsing internet to buy somthing.
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