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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 02. 07 조회 13626

My lunchtime

작성자: 119159 담당 튜터: Faith2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
We usually have one hour lunch time.
It usually begins at 11:30 and at 1:00.
Because we have so many people,
we have lunch time diffrently depending on stairs which we work at.
I have lunch with my co-workers in my department.
After that, We usually take a walk neraby compnay to talking about company or personel things.
I'm the happiest time in the day.
Because We havn't nearly time to talk each other in the workplace.
Sometimes I go to bank to deal with mony or go to the service center to fix something
or browsing internet to buy somthing.
튜터 교정 답변
We usually have one hour lunch break. It usually have a break at 11:30 and around 1:00pm. Because we have so many employees in the company, we have a different lunch time depending on floor which we work at. I often eat lunch with my co-workers in my department. After that, we usually take a walk nearby the company to talk about the company or personel things. It's the happiest time of my day. Because We hardly have time to talk with each other in the workplace. Sometimes I go to bank to deal with money or go to the service center to fix something or browsing internet to buy somthing.
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