I write about Concert

[ CORRECTION]

I like going to the korean pop concert with my friends.

-> I like going to a Korean pop concert with my friends. -Good!

I have a favorite place to enjoy concert. It is seoul art center Because it is located right beside the subway station.

-> I have a favorite place to enjoy watching a concert. It is the Seoul Art Center. I like going there because it is located right beside the subway station.

So it is convenient to go there. -Good!

I also have a favorite seat to enjoy concert.

-> I also have a favorite seat to watch the concert.

I like to watch the concert in the very front. -Good!

I like standing on the open floor in the front since that's where all the action is.

-> I like standing on the open floor at the front since that's where all the action is.

We can sing loudly along with the singer and jump up to the music.-Good!

It is very exciting there with my friends and it feels like I become one with a group.

-> It is very exciting there with my friends and it feels like I become one with the group.

After that, I relieve stress. and I usually buy tickets on the website of seoul art center early because first row tickets sell out quickly.

-> After that watching the concert, I relieve stress. and Anyway, I usually buy tickets on the website of Seoul Art Center early because the first row tickets sell out quickly.

These tickets are usually very expensive so I can't go often, but I will go to the concert soon with my friends to jump around and stress out.

->These tickets are usually very expensive so I can't go often, but I will go to the concert soon with my friends to jump around and to stress out.

[ COMMENT]

Hi Moon! Thank you for sharing this with me.

Watching concert is definitely fun and exciting especially if you're with your friends. I am glad to know that you like music, especially the Kpop genre. It is nice to know someone like you who enjoys watching and dancing with the music. Anyway, I also like Kpop. ^^

I hope that you will be able to watch a Kpop concert soon and have fun! Tell me some stories then! ^^

-T. Monica