last weekend my activity
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Last weekend so busy.
I was hiking with my daughter and her friends Namsan mountain.
Namsan is located in middle of seoul, the mountain is not high.
We walked for an hour up the mauntain.
The view from the mountain so fantastic. At the top of the mountain we
had used the ice cream.
Although diffcult to clib the mountain daughter, was really fun.
We promise to climb Namsam mountain often.
I was hiking with my daughter and her friends Namsan mountain.
Namsan is located in middle of seoul, the mountain is not high.
We walked for an hour up the mauntain.
The view from the mountain so fantastic. At the top of the mountain we
had used the ice cream.
Although diffcult to clib the mountain daughter, was really fun.
We promise to climb Namsam mountain often.
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