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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 08. 19 조회 14540

The latest cooking experience

작성자: 71219 담당 튜터: Love
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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The last time I cooked was last month, on my wife’s birthday.
Of course, I cooked her my specialty; Japchae.
It also happens that Japchae is the representative food for joyous occasions,
and Japchae noodles represent longevity, so it is the perfect food for birthdays.

Before my wife came, I had all the preparations ready.
I asked her to go directly to our house.
When she told me she had left her office, I started to cook.
When she arrived about 20 minutes later, my Japchae was ready and it was still hot.

My wife was surprised to see that I had cooked Japchae as it is quite a difficult dish to make.
I wished her a happy birthday and told her that this Japchae is my birthday present.
She took a mouthful and told me that it was so delicious I should open a Japchae restaurant.

I was very happy to hear that.
It was a memorable moment.
튜터 교정 답변

The last time I cooked was last month, on my wife’s birthday. Of course, I cooked her my specialty; Japchae. It also happens that Japchae is the representative food for joyous occasions, and Japchae noodles represent longevity, so it is the perfect food for birthdays. Before my wife came, I had all the preparations ready. I asked her to go directly to our house. When she told me she had left her office, I started to cook. When she arrived about 20 minutes later, my Japchae was ready and it was still hot. My wife was surprised to see that I had cooked Japchae as it is quite a difficult dish to make. I wished her a happy birthday and told her that this Japchae is my birthday present. She took a mouthful and told me that it was so delicious I should open a Japchae restaurant. I was very happy to hear that. It was a memorable moment.

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-> Of course, I cooked her my specialty, Japchae.

-> Before my wife came home, I had all the preparations ready.

-> I wished her a happy birthday and told her that this Japchae was my birthday present.

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