The latest cooking experience
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
The last time I cooked was last month, on my wife’s birthday.
Of course, I cooked her my specialty; Japchae.
It also happens that Japchae is the representative food for joyous occasions,
and Japchae noodles represent longevity, so it is the perfect food for birthdays.
Before my wife came, I had all the preparations ready.
I asked her to go directly to our house.
When she told me she had left her office, I started to cook.
When she arrived about 20 minutes later, my Japchae was ready and it was still hot.
My wife was surprised to see that I had cooked Japchae as it is quite a difficult dish to make.
I wished her a happy birthday and told her that this Japchae is my birthday present.
She took a mouthful and told me that it was so delicious I should open a Japchae restaurant.
I was very happy to hear that.
It was a memorable moment.
Of course, I cooked her my specialty; Japchae.
It also happens that Japchae is the representative food for joyous occasions,
and Japchae noodles represent longevity, so it is the perfect food for birthdays.
Before my wife came, I had all the preparations ready.
I asked her to go directly to our house.
When she told me she had left her office, I started to cook.
When she arrived about 20 minutes later, my Japchae was ready and it was still hot.
My wife was surprised to see that I had cooked Japchae as it is quite a difficult dish to make.
I wished her a happy birthday and told her that this Japchae is my birthday present.
She took a mouthful and told me that it was so delicious I should open a Japchae restaurant.
I was very happy to hear that.
It was a memorable moment.
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