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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 08. 25 조회 13547

Talk about some technologies and equipment at work

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Each day at work I make use of many different electric equipments and technologies.

Like most office workers, I use a computer to do most of my work in my office.
It's an essential tool for writing up reports, communicating with co-workers, doing research.
I often use a telephone to discuss with work colleagues.
I think it's easier to use a telephone than hold a meeting.
And I use a smart phone to check my business e-mail while I'm on outside duty.

In addition, I use an overhead projector very often in my office.
There are many presentation projects assigned to me.
Therefore, when I have my presentation,
I use the computer, the Internet and the overhead projector in the conference room.

The more familiar I get with different kinds of technology at work, the easier my job becomes.
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Each day at work I make use of many different electric equipments and technologies. Like most office workers, I use a computer to do most of my work in my office. It's an essential tool for writing up reports, communicating with co-workers, doing research. I often use a telephone to discuss with work colleagues. I think it's easier to use a telephone than hold a meeting. And I use a smart phone to check my business e-mail while I'm on outside duty. In addition, I use an overhead projector very often in my office. There are many presentation projects assigned to me. Therefore, when I have my presentation, I use the computer, the Internet and the overhead projector in the conference room. The more familiar I get with different kinds of technology at work, the easier my job becomes.

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-> Each day at work, I make use of many different electric equipments and technologies.

-> It's an essential tool for writing up reports, communicating with co-workers and doing research.

-> And I also use a smart phone to check my business e-mail while I'm on outside duty.

-> Therefore, when I have my presentation, I use the computer, the internet and the overhead projector in the conference room.

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Great efforts Jason! Keep up the good work! yeslaugh

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