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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 02. 10 조회 13659

Hi! Teacher

작성자: 1475627 담당 튜터: Mitch
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi~ my teacher, Mitch!
My phone turned off this morning,
So I missed your call.
Tommorrow, I check my handphone battery again!
Have a nice day and see you.
튜터 교정 답변
Incorrect: Hi~ my teacher, Mitch! Correct: Hi, my Teacher Mitch! Incorrect: My phone turned off this morning, Correct: My phone was turned off this morning. So I missed your call. Incorrect: Tommorrow, I check my handphone battery again! Correct: Tomorrow, I will check my handy phone battery again! Have a nice day and see you. =============================================================== Hello there, Stephanie! Thank you for writing a message for me. I understand that your phone run out of battery that's why I couldn't contact you. I'll catch you again tomorrow. By the way, if you want to send me a message. Please write it in the "MESSAGE" section, not here in the "COMPOSITION" section. Have a great day, Teacher Mitch^_^
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