Regularly excercise.
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Thanks to your answer to my English composition.
Have you had any unforgettable experiences when doing excersie? If so, when was it and where were you doing excercise? Tell me about the experience in as much detail as you can.
- I was hectic these days for me. Because I started new project for work. I hardly had enough time to do excercise. I'm usually sitting front of my computer during work. I hardly ever move. Finally, I felt strange. I had a disk in my neck. I known that It is important to do excercise.
Whenever I get home alrealy, I try to go to the park in my neighborhood. but I can't work hard because It can put stress on the neck.
And then I think exercise give me some kind of power and motivation in my day life.
Have you had any unforgettable experiences when doing excersie? If so, when was it and where were you doing excercise? Tell me about the experience in as much detail as you can.
- I was hectic these days for me. Because I started new project for work. I hardly had enough time to do excercise. I'm usually sitting front of my computer during work. I hardly ever move. Finally, I felt strange. I had a disk in my neck. I known that It is important to do excercise.
Whenever I get home alrealy, I try to go to the park in my neighborhood. but I can't work hard because It can put stress on the neck.
And then I think exercise give me some kind of power and motivation in my day life.
튜터 교정 답변
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