homework (UNIT2)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Where do you live?
-> I live in Chonan. It is my hometowm. But I don't have lived this city for my whole life. When I was 20 years old, I lived in Seoul, capital of South Korea, because of my university. At that time, it is my first experience that I live alone. After I graduate my school, I came back to my hometown because my company send me to the city.
How long have you been living there?
-> I have lived for 3 years in Chonan after I came back to my hometown. It is the completely same as the period that I have worked at my company. And I am living with my parents. They live this city for about 30 years.
Please explain me a little bit about your house/apartment.
-> I am living in apartment that my parents own. It has 4 rooms and 2 restrooms. Before my sister moved to other city, my family was 4, father, mother, sister and me. So a person could use a room. In the living room, there is a big television, so my family take a rest most time there.
-> I live in Chonan. It is my hometowm. But I don't have lived this city for my whole life. When I was 20 years old, I lived in Seoul, capital of South Korea, because of my university. At that time, it is my first experience that I live alone. After I graduate my school, I came back to my hometown because my company send me to the city.
How long have you been living there?
-> I have lived for 3 years in Chonan after I came back to my hometown. It is the completely same as the period that I have worked at my company. And I am living with my parents. They live this city for about 30 years.
Please explain me a little bit about your house/apartment.
-> I am living in apartment that my parents own. It has 4 rooms and 2 restrooms. Before my sister moved to other city, my family was 4, father, mother, sister and me. So a person could use a room. In the living room, there is a big television, so my family take a rest most time there.
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