Describe my house (1/2)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I will tell you about my house.
I live in an apartment in Seocho-gu which is southern part of Seoul.
It is on the 7th floor and has a beautiful view of a park.
There are three bedrooms, a bath room, a kitchen and a living room in my apartment.
When you open the door, you can see a shoe cabinet on your left.
On your right, there is a bath room. Every morning I take a shower listening to music.
Beyond the entrance place, there is a living room in the middle of my house.
The living room has a comfortable sofa, luxurious smart TV and home theater system.
I like to spend time watching TV in the living room.
These days, I watch TV historical drama about Korean traditional hero.
I live in an apartment in Seocho-gu which is southern part of Seoul.
It is on the 7th floor and has a beautiful view of a park.
There are three bedrooms, a bath room, a kitchen and a living room in my apartment.
When you open the door, you can see a shoe cabinet on your left.
On your right, there is a bath room. Every morning I take a shower listening to music.
Beyond the entrance place, there is a living room in the middle of my house.
The living room has a comfortable sofa, luxurious smart TV and home theater system.
I like to spend time watching TV in the living room.
These days, I watch TV historical drama about Korean traditional hero.
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