homework unit3
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
What company do you work for?
-> I'm working for Hanwha corporation. It is one of the big company in South Korea. It has many businesses such as insurance, department store, hotel, manufacturing, chemical, and so on.
Please explain me your duties in your company a little bit detail.
-> My duty is about finance. My division is accounting, so I have to manage money every day and make a monthly report for senior manager. And it is needed to make perfect because it is very important position. If someone in my part make a mistake, it is connected to loss directly.
How do you think about your job?
-> Personally, I don't like my job. I'm not interested in about accounting and it is very boring. At first, I want to work at planning division. But my company send me this position because my major is related to numbers, Statistics.
-> I'm working for Hanwha corporation. It is one of the big company in South Korea. It has many businesses such as insurance, department store, hotel, manufacturing, chemical, and so on.
Please explain me your duties in your company a little bit detail.
-> My duty is about finance. My division is accounting, so I have to manage money every day and make a monthly report for senior manager. And it is needed to make perfect because it is very important position. If someone in my part make a mistake, it is connected to loss directly.
How do you think about your job?
-> Personally, I don't like my job. I'm not interested in about accounting and it is very boring. At first, I want to work at planning division. But my company send me this position because my major is related to numbers, Statistics.
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