daily working
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I am an office worker and my working hour is from 9 to 6.
So I usually wake up 6 am at home and I prepare to go out at 8 am.
I arrive at my company at 8:50
Right after arriving at work, My first work is to set a my desk something like open my drawer, turn on my laptop computer and so on.
Before starting my job, I wash my mug cup and I make a cup of coffee.
While drinking my coffee, I check the email. And my work start! Beat the work!
My major job is to check & analysis system like pc, server which is infected from malware like virus.
and I find vulnerability against samsung IT system.
Then I finish my work around 7 p.m, Sometime I work until 11 pm
When I go home, I'm exhausted. But I have other job for my family.
So Daily life is always busy. so When I have free time, I have to sleep alot
So I usually wake up 6 am at home and I prepare to go out at 8 am.
I arrive at my company at 8:50
Right after arriving at work, My first work is to set a my desk something like open my drawer, turn on my laptop computer and so on.
Before starting my job, I wash my mug cup and I make a cup of coffee.
While drinking my coffee, I check the email. And my work start! Beat the work!
My major job is to check & analysis system like pc, server which is infected from malware like virus.
and I find vulnerability against samsung IT system.
Then I finish my work around 7 p.m, Sometime I work until 11 pm
When I go home, I'm exhausted. But I have other job for my family.
So Daily life is always busy. so When I have free time, I have to sleep alot
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