about my childhood_part1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Looking back to my childhood memories, I was just an ordinary student who didn't get noticed very much. It seems that I didn't have much memorable occasions when I was in teen ages because I was not such brave to break the school rule for enjoying a kind of rebellion. Rather I was a timid student who focused on me, not being in front of others.
Something memorable that happened to me when I was in teen ages was that sometimes I skipped the private institutes where I spent most of my time after school and went to a movie theater to watch a Chinese action movie which was quite popular among teenagers. I was also a big fan of Chinese action stars such as Jackie Chan.
Something memorable that happened to me when I was in teen ages was that sometimes I skipped the private institutes where I spent most of my time after school and went to a movie theater to watch a Chinese action movie which was quite popular among teenagers. I was also a big fan of Chinese action stars such as Jackie Chan.
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