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about my childhood_part2

작성자: HCC200902319 담당 튜터: Wynston2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Now that I think about it, I got vicarious satisfaction out of watching such Chinese action movies since I felt I was confined to schools. For some reasons, many students from my days to even nowadays in Korea have been enforced to spend most of their time to study hard day and night to keep on top. No one knows why this is happening ever.
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Now that I think about it, I got vicarious (did you refer to the thesaurus to come up with this word?) satisfaction out of watching such Chinese action movies since I felt I was confined to schools. For some reasons, many students from my school days to even nowadays in Korea have been enforced to spend most of their time to study hard day and night in order to keep on top. No one ever knows why this is happening ever.

**During next session, we'll discuss what it is that you mean by the word 'vicarious'.  (Interesting!)

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