Watching a movie with my friend
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The last time I watched a movie in the cinema was about one year ago.
I watched ‘Resident Evil 4’ with my friend.
It was very difficult to find someone who wanted to accompany me to a horror movie,
so I promised my friend that I would treat him to dinner if he’d go with me.
Since it was a very popular movie, I reserved the tickets through the Internet a few days earlier and on the day, I picked them up at the ticket counter.
I bought popcorn and beverages to eat during the screening.
As it turned out, the movie was not as good as I expected it to be.
After watching the movie, I took him to a restaurant as I had promised and bought him dinner.
After I came home, I wrote a review of the movie on my blog.
I watched ‘Resident Evil 4’ with my friend.
It was very difficult to find someone who wanted to accompany me to a horror movie,
so I promised my friend that I would treat him to dinner if he’d go with me.
Since it was a very popular movie, I reserved the tickets through the Internet a few days earlier and on the day, I picked them up at the ticket counter.
I bought popcorn and beverages to eat during the screening.
As it turned out, the movie was not as good as I expected it to be.
After watching the movie, I took him to a restaurant as I had promised and bought him dinner.
After I came home, I wrote a review of the movie on my blog.
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