About my family
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
My family is consisted of 4 people, father, mother, sister, and me. Now my sister is living in another city, so only 3 people is living together. Many family in Korea was big such as living with their grand parents until 1980, but after that, they start to live with only 2 generations. Therefore we don't have experiences that we heard some old age stories from our grand parent. And people live alone increase thesedays. They want to live without their neighborhood, and freely. Even they don't want to meet their relatives. In my case, I like to meet my hometown friend. They are pure when we meet comparing to company colleague. That's why I feel comfortable whenever I visit my hometown.
튜터 교정 답변
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