Watching Movie.
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
You indicate in your survey you like to watch a movie. How often do you go to the movies? Where do you usally go? who do you go with?
-Right I checked watching a movie in my interasting survey/ I like watching a movie. I'm usually watching movie once a week. I go to move theater every weekend. If I don't have enought time and money to go there, I'm used to watching a movie at home throught TV or computer. I moved in to my new house last December. One of it's advantage is close from my house. The reason why I can often go to the movie theater more than old house. I almost go to the theater with my sister Because I lives with her, whenever I can go there.
-Right I checked watching a movie in my interasting survey/ I like watching a movie. I'm usually watching movie once a week. I go to move theater every weekend. If I don't have enought time and money to go there, I'm used to watching a movie at home throught TV or computer. I moved in to my new house last December. One of it's advantage is close from my house. The reason why I can often go to the movie theater more than old house. I almost go to the theater with my sister Because I lives with her, whenever I can go there.
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