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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 09. 03 조회 13960

before watching a movie!

작성자: 1101875579 담당 튜터: Meril
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
What do you usually do before you go to a movie theater? What do you do after watching the movie? Please tell me about a typical day when you go to the movies.

- Before I usually go to a movi theater. I carefully check the review of people who have already seen. It is almost rated using a five-star. I watch a movie which get more stars. but I try that I hardly ever heard about story before whatching it. Because I don't like to spoil watching the movie. After watching a movie, I'm usually talking about the story with my friends and sharing each other opinion.
튜터 교정 답변

What do you usually do before you go to a movie theater? What do you do after watching the movie? Please tell me about a typical day when you go to the movies. -

Before I usually go to a movi theater.

-> Before I usually go to a movie theater.

I carefully check the review of people who have already seen.

-> I carefully check the reviews of people who have already seen the movie. 

It is almost rated using a five-star. I watch a movie which get more stars. but I try that I hardly ever heard about story before whatching it.

-> It is mostly rated using a five-star. I watch a movie which get more stars, but I try some movies that I hardly ever heard about. story before whatching it. 

Because I don't like to spoil watching the movie.

-> Because I don't like to spoilers before watching the movie. 

After watching a movie, I'm usually talking about the story with my friends and sharing each other opinion.

-> After watching a movie, I'm usually talking about the story with my friends and share each others' opinion.

 

Hi Song, thank you for writing this composition. I am sure that you enjoy going to the movie theater with your sister and friends. In my case, I like going to the theater alone, so that I can enjoy the movie more. Because if I bring along my friends, they will ask me questions about the movie and when I watch a movie I want to focus. See you later in class!

 

-Meril^_^

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