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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 09. 04 조회 12515

My dislike movie genre

작성자: 1100885033 담당 튜터: Mae
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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I particularly hate horror movies.
I think that I cannot watch horror movies because When I watch horror movies, I have to get a too much stress.
I really don't like surprisal and I was afraid of the images and the sounds from that movie.
So I think that I stop short of paying money for watching horror movies.




And If you don't mind, I want that next lesson is unit7(cooking)
because I don't choice concert & watching sports.
튜터 교정 답변

I particularly hate horror movies.->  GOOD SENTENCE

I think that I cannot watch horror movies because When I watch horror movies, I have to get a too much stress.

-> I think i cannot watch horror movies because if i will watch it, i will get too much stress

I really don't like surprisal and I was afraid of the images and the sounds from that movie.

-> I really don't like suspense and i am afraid of the images and sounds of the movie

So I think that I stop short of paying money for watching horror movies.

-> So i think i should stop paying money just to watch horror movies.

And If you don't mind, I want that next lesson is unit7(cooking) because I don't choice concert & watching sports.

->If you don't mind. I want to talk about Unit 7. Cooking next meeting. I don't  like concert and watching sports.

 

Hi,

Thank you for sharing your least favorite movie genre again. Let's talk about Unit 7. Cooking next meeting. Have a nice day!

 

Teacher Mae

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