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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 09. 05 조회 14445

Unit 11. Question 3 : Describe a picture

작성자: pos500383 담당 튜터: Wynston1
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This picture has been taken inside.
There are 3 people in front of a table. 2 people are one side and the other is opposite side.
On the left side, a man who is wearing black glasses and a bracelet on his left hand is sitting and resting his chin on his hand. on the left side of the man, a woman who is wearing a white top, a hat and wearing a necklace on her neck is sitting a chair.
On the right, a man is wearing ivory dress suit. And, a laptop is opened on the desk.
In the back ground, there are handrail between post.
It seems like that they are talking discussion concerning their issues.
튜터 교정 답변

This picture has been taken inside. There are 3 people in front of a table. 2 people are one side and the other is opposite side. On the left side, a man who is wearing black glasses and a bracelet on his left hand is sitting and resting his chin on his hand.  On the left side of the man, a woman who is wearing a white top, a hat and wearing a necklace on her neck is sitting a chair. On the right, a man is wearing an ivory dress suit, and, a laptop is opened on the desk.  In the background, there's a are handrail between posts. It seems like that they the people are talking discussion discussing concerning important their issues.

Commendable description Sam!  Take note of the minor, but important modifications noted in red.

 

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