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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 09. 10 조회 14745

Unit 5 - About your neighbors

작성자: HWMC201200797 담당 튜터: Wynston2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I have been lived at current abode for 3 years. When I was child, I lived at current town. But I lived in Seoul when I was 20 years old because of my university. After I came back to this town 3 years ago, I was surprised because The town is changed totally. Frankly speaking, I don't like my town. Since old friends moved other citys, I don't have friends in this town. I am bored. Even I don't know that who lives at the next door. I sometimes see them but just we greet each other simply. That's all. As time goes by, I think we will get better relationship because we often come across. Distance in living is the most important factor when we live in a community.
튜터 교정 답변

I have been lived living at my current abode for 3 years. When I was child, I lived at current town here, but I moved to  lived in Seoul when I was 20 years old because of my to attend university. After I came back to this town 3 years ago, When I returned, I  was surprised because the town is has changed totally alot!  Frankly speaking, I really don't like my town, because my childood Since old friends have moved away to other citys, and I don't have friends in this town.  For this reason, I am bored. Even I don't even know that who lives at the next door, though I we sometimes see, them but just we greet and merely greet each other simply. That's all. As time goes by, I think we will get establish a better relationship because we often come across each other. Distance in living is the most important factor when we live in a community.

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