Hi Monica. Did you have a good weekend?
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi Monica..
Thank you for worring me at last friday.
So, I got a good result.
The bad boy had been punished by his teacher and his parents.
Also I met his parents and teacher, and told them about him.
We dicussed many things. We let him know his faults.
We got his apology. He promise me that he never do wrong.
^^
Also I had a good holiday which is called Chusuk in korean.
I think that Chusok is same thanksgiving day.
All of Korean go around relations and say hello each other and memory ancestors At Chusok.
How do you do at your holiday?
Thank you for worring me at last friday.
So, I got a good result.
The bad boy had been punished by his teacher and his parents.
Also I met his parents and teacher, and told them about him.
We dicussed many things. We let him know his faults.
We got his apology. He promise me that he never do wrong.
^^
Also I had a good holiday which is called Chusuk in korean.
I think that Chusok is same thanksgiving day.
All of Korean go around relations and say hello each other and memory ancestors At Chusok.
How do you do at your holiday?
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