Unit 7 - your childhood
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I had grown up in Chonan. It is a small city in Korea. In Chonan, I moved several times in the city because my family and I want to live in bigger house. One of the house I lived had a very beautiful scene. Since it was located to rural area, we could walk around there to feel natural things. I went to middle and high school in the same city. In korea, students study very hard even all day lond for 6 years. Therefore I don't have much experiences when I was a student except for studying. But I don't regret about that. I think I'm happy now from studying hard at that time.
I'm not certain you remember below comment on 2014-09-10 homework. This is former homework.
(***Jun --- try and develop the sentence below a little more. I'm not clear what you are really trying to convey to me. (Use your thesaurus).)
=> It means most people that live alone in Korea don't want to interact with their neighborhood and relatives.
I'm not certain you remember below comment on 2014-09-10 homework. This is former homework.
(***Jun --- try and develop the sentence below a little more. I'm not clear what you are really trying to convey to me. (Use your thesaurus).)
=> It means most people that live alone in Korea don't want to interact with their neighborhood and relatives.
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