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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 09. 12 조회 13751

The last time that you went out with work colleagues (2/2)

작성자: 71219 담당 튜터: Jae
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Mogul is popular for their chicken dishes, but my favorite is their spicy shrimp curry.
In contrast to common belief, curry from India is not always spicy.
I've never had such delicious food.
And I would recommend that you try their 'Nan’, which is a type of Indian bread.
It goes well with almost every Indian dish.

Hopefully, I'll have a chance to eat out again with my family there.
튜터 교정 답변

Mogul is popular for their chicken dishes, but my favorite is their spicy shrimp curry. (good sentence)

In contrast to common belief, curry from India is not always spicy.  (good sentence)

I've never had such delicious food.  (good sentence)

And I would recommend that you try their 'Nan’, which is a type of Indian bread.  (good sentence)

It goes well with almost every Indian dish.  (good sentence)

Hopefully, I'll have a chance to eat out again with my family there.  (good sentence)

 

MESSAGE:

Hi Jason,

I would like to try those dishes. Now, I'm getting hungry. :)

I hope I can go to that restaurant too.

Have a wonderful day! See you next class! ^_^

Take care, 
Teacher Jae ♥

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