jogging
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I go to the gym in my company complex.
I try to go to the gym at least twice a week.
I spend about 1 hour at the gym.
There are nor many different type of equipment that i use.
One of my favorite is the running machine.
I always use this machine for thirty minutes.
I like to go to the gym because it help me to release my stress.
It also help me start my dag early.
I try to go to the gym at least twice a week.
I spend about 1 hour at the gym.
There are nor many different type of equipment that i use.
One of my favorite is the running machine.
I always use this machine for thirty minutes.
I like to go to the gym because it help me to release my stress.
It also help me start my dag early.
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