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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 09. 15 조회 12516

family

작성자: 1100515682 담당 튜터: Wynston2
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My family is very close together. My family member is mom, dad, and me. I am the only child. My father goes to work except weekends. My mother is a housewife. For last i am high school student. I talk more than one hour per day. So i think our family is good.
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My family is very close together. My family member is mom, dad, and me. I am the only child. My father goes to work except weekends. My mother is a housewife. For last i am high school student. I talk more than one hour per day. So i think our family is good.

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My family consists of my mon, dad, and I.  I am an only child, and we are a very close knit family.  My father works throughout the week, but not on weekends, and my mother is a housewife.  As for myself, I am a high school student, and love to talk with my family for at least one hour a day.  In my  opinion, I have a beautiful family.

 

***Jack -- take not of the idea-flow in how I wrote about the family.  We'll discuss that in detail next session.

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