Present the schedule for the first day
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
May I have your attention please.
I'll explain the schedule for the first day of the workshop.
Today's schedule is started at 10 O'clock with team activity. This will be over at 6 O'clock.
First, for team activity, all of you are requested to divide into 3 teams including members from different departments.
After then elect a leader and make a team name.
The lunch break time is from 1 to 2.
After team activity you'll have barbeque party at the Rose garden from 6 p.m to 8 p.m.
Presedent Kim is supposed to take part in the party to encourage you.
Also some special presents will be parpared for you during the party.
I promise that you can look forward to that presents.
I hope everyone can participate in today's events.
Thank you for your attention.
I'll explain the schedule for the first day of the workshop.
Today's schedule is started at 10 O'clock with team activity. This will be over at 6 O'clock.
First, for team activity, all of you are requested to divide into 3 teams including members from different departments.
After then elect a leader and make a team name.
The lunch break time is from 1 to 2.
After team activity you'll have barbeque party at the Rose garden from 6 p.m to 8 p.m.
Presedent Kim is supposed to take part in the party to encourage you.
Also some special presents will be parpared for you during the party.
I promise that you can look forward to that presents.
I hope everyone can participate in today's events.
Thank you for your attention.
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