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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 09. 16 조회 12874

The word I didn't tell you while last calling

작성자: 119841 담당 튜터: Leah2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi Leah

I expain something I didn't told you while calling yesterday

Last sunday, I visited my older sister's home

My older sister gave me play equipment, It's called TRIDER in korea

It's smiliar to kickboard
there are two differences between both of them

trident has three wheels and two foothold
but kickboard has two wheels and just on foothold

my childer was greatly pleased to get a trider

if you don't understand , click below website
http://ecx.images-amazon.com/images/I/41wHt%2BXjN6L._SX425_.jpg

I wonder what do you call it?

Thank you
튜터 교정 답변

Hi Leah I want to  explain  something about what I  told yesterday's class. Last sunday, I visited my older sister's home My older sister gave me play equipment, It's called TRIDER in korea It's smiliar to kickboard,There are  differences between trider and kickboard, trider has three wheels and two foothold but kickboard has two wheels and just on foothold my childen was greatly pleased to get a trider if you don't understand , click below website http://ecx.images-amazon.com/images/I/41wHt%2BXjN6L._SX425_.jpg I wonder what do you call it? Thank you.

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