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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 09. 21 조회 13129

Listening to Music

작성자: 1100802089 담당 튜터: Wynston1
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Hello Wynston. Thanks for reviewing my homework.
I also like listening to music, but I don't have specially preper groups or singers.
I like melody more than words. Normally, I don't know the stories in the music even in my favorite songs. I think I'm not listening the stories on music. Instead of that I'm keeping the beat by tapping my foot or head or fingers.
I can play the piano well, and I like the rhythm, chord and harmony. So the stories on music is not attractive for me. It is not related with music genre, Ballad, Pop, Jazz and Rap.
Sometimes, I tried to understand the stories on music, if I curious it.
For example, I really liked Desperado of Eagles. I heard this song everyday on my head phone. But still don't know the whole stories of this song.
Soft music is playing currently. But it is not interfere with my writing. It is just a kind of wind or sea waves to me.
Bye~
튜터 교정 답변

Hello Wynston. Thanks for reviewing my homework.

I also like listening to music, but I don't have A  preper preferred groups or singers. I'D RATHER LISTEN TO THE  like melody more than THE words TO A SONG, AS I DON'T LISTEN TO THE MESSAGE IN IT, EVEN IF . Normally, I don't know the stories in the music even in IF IT'S A favorite songs. I think I'm not listening the stories on music. Instead, of that I'm keeping the beat by I tapping my foot FEET, or MOVE MY HEAD ACCORDING TO THE RHYTHM, AND / OR SNAP MY head or fingers TO THE MELODY. I DO HOWEVER, can play the piano well, and I like the rhythm, chord and harmony. So the Stories SUNG WITH THE on music is not AT ALL attractive for TO me, AS IN MY OPINION, it is not related with music genre, Ballad, Pop, Jazz and OR Rap. Sometimes, I tried TRY to understand the stories on IN THE music if I curious it. For example, I really liked Desperado of Eagles. I'VE heard this song everyday on my head phone, but still don't know UNDERSTAND the SOTRY IT TELLS. whole stories of this song. Soft music is playing currently but it is not interferING with my writing. It is just a kind of wind or sea waves to me. Bye~

 

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