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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 09. 22 조회 13454

Restaurant

작성자: 1100515682 담당 튜터: Wynston2
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My favorite restaurant is TGIF. TGIF means Thanks God Its Friday night. This restaurant has a salad bar inside the restaurant. When i go to TGIF i usually go there for salad bar. Because main foods are very expensive and they give us very little. When i go there and order main food, i usually order food that contains rice.
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My favorite restaurant is TGIF. TGIF means Thanks God It's Friday night. This restaurant has a salad bar inside the restaurant. Whenever i I go there to eat, TGIF i I usually go there head for salad bar, because the main foods are very expensive and they give us very little. When i go there and If I do order any of the main foods, i usually order food I prefer dishes that contains rice.

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