sorry. I have been absent today
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Good afternoon Teacher Paula
sorry. I have been absent today
I was very tired in the morning. so I couldn't listen my ring.
yesterday, I came back early night from my office.
sometimes, Whenever came back home early than other day,
I don't have any idea what to do. (So sad)
yesterday, I watched a japanese animation.
today I'll tell you about this story.
the title is The Garden of Words.
it sounds a little elegante.
The running time is about 45 minutes. very short. and very realistic.
and the story is about high school student and his young literature teacher.
When it rains, the boy didn't go to school in the morning.
he skipped the morning class. instead of that, he goes to a park.
at the park. he met a secret woman. (actually she is a teacher, but he didn't know that)
every rainy days, they met each other. and talk about their selves. (most of his life)
she alse don't want to go school and she has a very hard time in school.
anyway, they sympathize with each's words even though they didn't say their background.
this animation tells that falling in love doesn't care background . . ? . ?
:^)
anyway, It's good for me to write this. because I feel very sleepy. now is 3:30 pm
Thank you for reading my .. um.. letter ?
bye~
sorry. I have been absent today
I was very tired in the morning. so I couldn't listen my ring.
yesterday, I came back early night from my office.
sometimes, Whenever came back home early than other day,
I don't have any idea what to do. (So sad)
yesterday, I watched a japanese animation.
today I'll tell you about this story.
the title is The Garden of Words.
it sounds a little elegante.
The running time is about 45 minutes. very short. and very realistic.
and the story is about high school student and his young literature teacher.
When it rains, the boy didn't go to school in the morning.
he skipped the morning class. instead of that, he goes to a park.
at the park. he met a secret woman. (actually she is a teacher, but he didn't know that)
every rainy days, they met each other. and talk about their selves. (most of his life)
she alse don't want to go school and she has a very hard time in school.
anyway, they sympathize with each's words even though they didn't say their background.
this animation tells that falling in love doesn't care background . . ? . ?
:^)
anyway, It's good for me to write this. because I feel very sleepy. now is 3:30 pm
Thank you for reading my .. um.. letter ?
bye~
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