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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 09. 23 조회 13471

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작성자: 1100515682 담당 튜터: Wynston2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I use textmessge everyday. I usually send messages about 'where are you'or 'when does your academy ends?'. The advantage of text message is that we can just send it to a person and then he can check it any time. When we are doing conference we can't take a call, so when i want to take a touch with him i shuold leave a message
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I use textmessAGING everyday. I usually send messages about 'where are you, 'or, 'when does your academy ends?'. The advantage of OF text message MESSAGING is that we A MESSAGE can just send BE SENT, AND THEN CHECKED FOR A RESPONSE AT it to a person and then he can check it any time. IF A PERSON IS ON A CONFERENCE CALL,AND CAN'T TAKE A CALL, IT'S CONVENIENT TO LEAVE HIM OR HER When we are doing conference we can't take a call, so when i want to take a touch with him i shuold leave a TEXT message.

 

**Jack, remember to place a period (.) at the end of your sentences.  Every symbol has a meaning and purpose.  I hope this reflection is helpful.  Teacher Wynston

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